આ છે જિંદગી – સાત્વિક શાહ

જન્મથી મૃત્યુને પામવાનું નામ છે જિંદગી.
બચપનથી ઘડપણને પામવાનું નામ છે જિંદગી
ભણતરથી ઘડતરને પામવાનું નામ છે જિંદગી
    ઓ જિંદગીના દાતા તમારે નામ છે આ જિંદગી.

દુ:ખ કે સુખથી સુખ કે દુ:ખને પામવાનું નામ છે જિંદગી
હાર કે જીતથી જીત કે હારને પામવાનું નામ છે જિંદગી
અણગમા કે પ્રેમથી પ્રેમ કે અણગમાને પામવાનું નામ છે જિંદગી
    ઓ જિંદગીના દાતા તમારે કાજ છે આ જિંદગી.

ઈતિહાસના ઈશારે વર્તમાનની રચના છે જિંદગી
પણ ભવિષ્યના અરમાનો માટે વર્તમાનને જીવ્યા તે છે જિંદગી
આમ ઈતિહાસથી ભવિષ્ય પામવાનું નામ છે આ વર્તમાન જિંદગી
    ઓ જિંદગીના દાતા તમારે શરણે છે આ જિંદગી.

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  1. Rakesh Chavda says:

    Very nice small a complete definition of LIFE. Thanx Satwik shah.

  2. Swapnil says:

    its too good satvik, its just like u.

  3. Jyot says:

    Too good, i never knew u write poems…Great keep it up.

  4. DILIP says:

    Perfect for explanation life by poem,too good go ahed…..

    – DILIP KHANT

  5. satvik shah says:

    yes, its me the writer of the few lines.
    i would very firstly like to thank you all the readers for having feel of life with me in my words.
    its a poem based on following points.
    1. how to come over current failure
    2. how to feel future of our precious life.
    3. importance of parents in our life.
    4. visualise life in more broader sense instead evaluating the same in current success or failure.
    yes i would like add here that it is dominating to my friend dhaval shah, as it is his birth day gift from me in writing of 30 Jan 2006.
    thank you very much to life and all who accompany me in my life. mostly my parents.
    jay shree krishna.

  6. Smruti & Neelesh says:

    DEAR SATVIK,

    YOU HAVE WRITTEN VERY NICE POEM. KEEP WRITING AND SENDING US. KEEP IT UP.

  7. Viraj Dhopte says:

    Nicely wriiten, good presentation and touching message to all. Hey let this be the beginning of the life of the poem which will live through your pen. Many more expected…..

  8. sweta sudhalkar says:

    a very good effort.

    for all things u want to achieve
    for all things u want to fulfill
    never slow down ur pace
    go ahead and win the race
    in life what sometimes appear to be end
    is really a new begning.
    my best wishes are with u.

    let the ink keep flowing from ur pen for such more kind of enlightenments.

  9. dhaval shah says:

    HI Satvik, its a very good poem as i have said you personaly.Thank you for the written of this poem for me.

    But now you should have to write for your future better half.

    Keep it up my friend
    O.K. Bye.

  10. Rakesh Patel says:

    Hi satvik,
    Govinda here.
    I have read your poem. its loveliest poem as i have ever read.

    Best of luck for future.

  11. Vaibhav Shah says:

    Vaibhav shah friend of Dhaval
    its really nice to see your poem on net.keep it up and promote our gujarati language.

  12. Yogesh K Sharma says:

    Gr8 philosophy man! Keep it up.

  13. Tushar Lakdawala says:

    Contemplating on life is not so easy for every one, I congratulate for your poem, for your deep thinking and sharing your views with us. This poem reflects your deep thinking and your true nature. One great scriptures of india says ” This dormant world is a dream of God “

  14. Hemang says:

    FANTASTIC !! I was not knowing a numbercruncher (C.A.) can also be a good poet !! Bravo.. Keep it up !!

  15. Vandana Raiyani says:

    Really a good poem written in so simple words but saying so many things.

    Keep it up

  16. Nisarg says:

    Satvik,
    From date i know you, you are always excellent in doing your work & are never getting nervous while doing your work. Till what i know you have done your work withyour heart & that’s the reason your work is superb & even this poem is excellent keep going my best wishes are with you.

  17. Shailesh says:

    hi
    satvik
    congratulations.
    very good analysis of the life.
    although jidgi is ‘etihas na isare vartman che jindgi’
    always remember that “koshish karne valo ki kabhi har nahi hoti.”
    all the best and i wish that you got all success in life and the seva to gujarati sahitya will be continued by you.

    sahilesh h shah

  18. Gira says:

    Hello Satvik Bhai,
    You have written very nice poem. and u have included the whole meaning of the life, in such a small n sweet peom.

    it’s great. keep it up.

    – Gira

  19. sneha says:

    Aaaj title sathe mari pan ek kavita chhe tamaru E mail address apio to kyarek lakhi moklish…….

  20. hemantkumar b shah says:

    સુપર્બ્

  21. nayan panchal says:

    “ઈતિહાસના ઈશારે વર્તમાનની રચના છે જિંદગી
    પણ ભવિષ્યના અરમાનો માટે વર્તમાનને જીવ્યા તે છે જિંદગી
    આમ ઈતિહાસથી ભવિષ્ય પામવાનું નામ છે આ વર્તમાન જિંદગી”

    ખૂબ જ સરસ. આખા જીવનની વાત આટલી ઓછી લાઇનોમાં કહી દીધી.

    નયન

  22. અતુલ જાની (આગંતુક) says:

    સારો પ્રયત્ન.

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